HIV. In the United States, more than 980,000
cases of AIDS have been reported to the government. Worldwide it is estimated
that 33.2 million people are currently living with HIV. An epidemic that is
infecting over 50,000 people a year in the United States and has currently
killed more than 25 million people. HIV/AIDS is currently one of the leading
causes of death in the United States. The year 1981, describes the first, most shocking cases
of HIV in the United States, with 270 reported cases of severe immune
deficiency among gay men. Yet, what if there were more ways for our society to
become further educated on this fatal disease, you would think they would take
the precautionary steps right? Wrong. The government and HIV/AIDS foundations
have been fighting the severity of this problem for years, trying to obtain
medication and a solution to the problem. Although it seems that this deadly
disease is not yet decreasing in numbers, but increases. AIDS foundations
try and create ways to advocate the awareness and severity of this deadly
sexually transmitted disease. To educate and furthermore direct our society to
a more AIDS free one, everyone, worldwide, needs to jump on board and gain more
knowledge about HIV and AIDS; this will secure our society to becoming less
prone to getting AIDS and transmitting it to others.
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So why are so many people still so uneducated about HIV/AIDS if foundations and
organizations are actively advocating the disease? There is a plethora of
reasons that can contribute to how uninformed our society is about HIV/AIDS.
This deadly disease only allows society to do so much promoting and awareness
until, society on its own needs to be responsible and careful. For instance, the AIDS Calgary Awareness
Association actively gets involved in these AIDS community. Their mission
is to reduce the harm associated with HIV/AIDS for all individuals and
communities they serve. This association takes part in the AIDS Walk for Life
and AIDS Awareness Week. These are great ways to make AIDS more aware within societies,
by bringing everyone together for the support of that one cause. Although with
these activities going on, AIDS still seems to be infecting more people. It is
very easy to go out and speak about a topic, but to be able to move the
audience to want to get checked or to be the people that make the difference is
the hard part. Medicine in the United
States is always a touchy subject with people considering the prices of
medications; this definitely has a huge impact HIV/AIDS victims. For example, John
Martin, Gilead CEO recently jacks up drug prices to $28,500 per year for
AIDS medications. Top of the line doctors and medicine practices are used
every day to find a cure for this fatal disease. Prices of medicine make it
almost impossible for one to obtain, but the real cure for this fatal epidemic
is in the youth and our society in general. Our youth needs to be aware of how
this is affecting America and that’s what certain foundations do their
advocates for this epidemic. If people are not aware of their partner’s status,
this epidemic will never get better. It
is so much more common for our youth to get tested of other sexually
transmitted diseases, but AIDS never seems to be the one.
In recent studies, more outbreaks of AIDS have taken the death rate to higher levels
globally. Every 9.5 minutes
someone in the United States is infected with HIV. The fact that our society
has been putting in efforts and research to educate and determine when one is
said to develop HIV, yet the numbers, statistically are not decreasing as
rapidly has one had hoped. Americans seem to be very careless with their
health, not just talking about HIV/AIDS, but obesity, cancer and much more.
Globally HIV/AIDS is not decreasing, but increasing. The United States have
been very active trying to make this disease more aware and there efforts have
been slowly paying off. In November
24 2009, UNAIDS
(the Joint United Nations Programme on HIV/AIDS) reports that there has been a significant decline (-17%)
in new HIV infections in the past decade. Although when one looks at the more
recent people diagnosed with HIV
infection by 2011, the numbers do not seem to be falling at a rate that we
could say is successful. In 2010, White Americans rate seemed to increase from 6.6
percent to 7.0 percent in 2011, African Americans rates seem to be increasing
as well from 58.0 percent to a huge 60.4 percent in 2011. “The rate of new HIV infections has stabilized in many
countries, the disease continues to exact an enormous toll: 1.8 million deaths
in 2010 alone, grief and hardship for countless families and communities, and
deleterious economic effects as those in the prime of life who lack timely
access to treatment are lost to parenting and the workforce” (Fauci). In a study done showing how persons in special treatment with HIV/AIDS
greatly improves their health status by receiving treatment (Moore). These
results are an important demonstration of what can be achieved by HIV patients
in care.
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Society needs
to become more aware of their decisions that they are making. Not only do
they affect ones self, they also affect others around them. Now what needs to
happen is force and legislation to help revise guidelines and make people more
aware of this epidemic. Barack
Obama has created a lot more opportunities and efforts to create a more
HIV-free world. In 2009, President Obama called from the first National HIV/AIDS
Strategy for the United States and again in May 2009,
President Obama launched the Global Health Initiative, six year, $63 billion
effort to develop a comprehensive approach to addressing global health in low-
and middle-income countries, which will potentially help this epidemic worldwide.
There are a plethora of reasons as to why President Obama keeps spending more
and more money on AIDS research. It is
not just a problem that we, as Americans, have; this problem is global. By
developing efforts to approach and address global health can only improve the
health of people in American too. In 2010,
President Obama signs the Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act, which
expanded access, care and prevention for all Americans. Not a
lot of people consider HIV/AIDS to be an epidemic, or even put it in the same
category as cancer, but it can potentially be much worse considering that it
gets spread through sexual intercourse.
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Now what needs
to happen is society needs to become more educated through schools and HIV/AIDS
needs to be a more popular topic in the United States. High schools throughout
some states never really talk about HIV/AIDS and how much of a problem it is or
even where to get tested. Yes, places
have testing centers, but not many people know of these places or that these
options are even available. Just simply making this topic more aware to our
youth will be greatly beneficial to our society. 1 in 5
people have HIV/AIDS and do not even know that they have it. It is completely consuming the United States and
a lot of our youth do not even realize what they’re doing when they are
exploring with their partners. People know of HIV and what it turns into but a
lot of people do not know the hardcore facts and how easily this gets
transferred from one another.
With the
epidemic of HIV/AIDS now being accountable for more than half of Americans
death, not only do the foundations and government need to create better
methods, guidelines needs to be set for the obscene amount of cases of this
life-changing disease. Without more awareness of this disease, nothing is going
to get better, adolescents will continue to have unprotected sex and extract
the STD from their partner. Our youth needs to be in control and aware of this disease and the effects it has on this country and world. Its time for a big change America, it is
unfair to keep putting our youth in danger just because education about the
disease is not out there in schools or homes. At the end of the day,
HIV/AIDS is extremely preventable if the protection, education, and care are
taken.
Work Cited
Fauci AS, Folkers GK. Toward an AIDS-Free
Generation. JAMA. 2012;308(4):343-344.
doi:10.1001/jama.2012.8142.
Moore, Richard
D., MD, Jeanne C. Keruly, and John G. Bartlett. "Clinical Infectious
Diseases." Improvement in the
Health of HIV-Infected Persons in Care: Reducing Disparities. Oxford
Journals, 26 Sept. 2012. Web. 15 Apr. 2013.
Large use of pathos and logos to get your point across. Obviously a rough draft so the pictures and videos, etc will help strengthen the argument. At the beginning you talk about the worldwide epidemic whilst through the paper you stay domestic, try and balance that more. Don't forget to add the MLA works cited page at the bottom also. If you need more words you could try to propose a sample idea of how to help prevent HIV/AIDS. Argument was clear and understandable.
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